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PostSubject: Book Worm :)   December 23rd 2009, 8:09 pm

ok so this is going to be my 3rd or 4th attempting writing this because each other time it got deleted and then i finally gave up but, i'm going to try this one more time and i hope you guys like it Smile
also i just want to say that this is going to take place in las vegas since thats where i live.

I was at home one day and got very bored so I decided to take a ride down to barnes and nobles right near my house. I'm a big reader and I love to go find new books. I got to the bookstore and literally ran in for that great journey on the inside but, I didn't know there was something even more extreme then my books. I started looking at all different types of books and having just a great time. As I was looking I was also listening to the music the store was playing and kinda dancing along with it. The song changed to Michael Jackson's Billie Jean and as you can imagine I just busted out dancing, lol. As I was walking and dancing I bumped into a man. I turned around and apologized to the man. He looked at me and I looked at him and he giggled and said it's alright sweetheart. My eyes almost popped out of my head it was Michael Jackson. He was dressed pretty normally so people didn't realize it was him because of how well he blended in. I was still in shock when he looked at my stack of books and said so you like reading? I answered yes, very much so. He answered me too. We went on talking for a while and then he said I don't mean to be to forward but, would you like to come have dinner with me tonight. I said yes, that would be great! He told me he'd send a car for me around 6:00 p.m. I was so excited, I ran home and put on a black dress, with some black pumps. The limo picked me up and I thanked the driver and got in. It took us to one of the big hotels on the strip, the venetian. We got there and an escort lead me to Michael's room or should I say suite! I knocked on the door and one of the security guards opened up the door for me. He said with a smile on his face, Ms. Mariah Michael is waiting for you and lead me to the dining area. I walked in and Michael stood up from the table and looked at me with a huge smile! He said you look so beautiful and kissed my hand. I sat down next to him and we ate our dinner and talked!!! Oh did we talk so much and it was just amazing. After dinner Michael turned on some music and asked will you dance with me and I said I don't know how to dance while blushing. He grabbed my hand and said let me show you and smiled widely! I took his hand and he started to lead and I followed with a couple mess up's and a lot of blushing I danced with the King of Pop. He looked into my eyes and kissed me and I kissed him back!!! I could still taste the dessert we had on his lips, chocolate covered strawberries. He asked me is this okay, am i rushing you? I said no Michael I want you too. I new even after just meeting him that he was the man i'd been waiting for and I wanted him just as bad as he wanted me! We started kissing more roughly while walking to Michael's bedroom. We got to the room and I'm pretty shy so I was blushing but, I still wanted Michael more then I'd ever wanted another man. He pushed me onto the bed and started unzipping the back of my dress. I almost ripped his shirt off his body! He slid the dress of me to reveal red lace bra and panties. He said to me with a smile these look like they were made to be seen and I just blushed and answered well now you've seen them! He kissed me so pationately then I unbuckled his belt and took his pants off, he was wearing silky red boxers and I started giggling because of the matching colors. He started caressing me while we kissed! I let out a couple of loud moans. He took of my bra and wispered into my ear do you even know how beautiful you are? I smiled and kissed him. He started licking my neck, then my colarbone until he got to my breasts. He caressed them and licked them, I shivered and arched my back in compliance. Oh Michael I moaned, he started kissing me down my stomach while taking off my panties. He put his long digits inside me and I shrieked in a good way. He thought I was hurt and asked Babe are you okay, I said yes please don't stop it feels so good! He kept going while licking random parts of my body, he was making me so hot!!! I needed him now, I couldn't wait another second! He new how much I wanted him and teased me, he took out his manhood and guided it up and down my thighs, I couldn't handle it so, I took control and got on top of him. He liked that!!! I road him at a steady pace so I could enjoy every second of it. Then he got on top of me again and put his huge self inside me and thrusted fast and hard!!! I moaned his name and shrieked again and again! Michael was so good, he was hard but, gentle! He new how to treat a lady. I was about to climax when he took himself out of me and pressed his tip to my opening, I cried don't tease me!!! He began again until we both climaxed! Afterwards we layed there and relaxed. I was a bit cold but, Michael covered me with the silky sheets. We just looked into each othere's eyes for a couple minutes and then finally I said to him now I know what type of books you were buying. Wink He said well you know I'm a bookworm, just like you sweetie!
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 23rd 2009, 10:02 pm

Few friendly suggestions:
1. Use quotations. We need to know exactly what is being said.
2. It needs more details. That was short with no real details to turn the reader on.
3. Spell check. You used the wrong knew.
4. Enough with the exclamation marks. You seemed way to happy,even for a fan. Lol!
5. Please make it longer because its a good topic but you need more rising action to get to the climax.
You had a very intersting topic and I wish I could've read your other stories because I'm sure they were really good and maybe even better then this one.
behold da random
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 24th 2009, 1:12 am

angelpup wrote:
Few friendly suggestions:
1. Use quotations. We need to know exactly what is being said.
2. It needs more details. That was short with no real details to turn the reader on.
3. Spell check. You used the wrong knew.
4. Enough with the exclamation marks. You seemed way to happy,even for a fan. Lol!
5. Please make it longer because its a good topic but you need more rising action to get to the climax.
You had a very intersting topic and I wish I could've read your other stories because I'm sure they were really good and maybe even better then this one.
behold da random

I'm sorry for the bad grammer and the lack of detail. I kind of rushed through this because of how many times I tried typing the other stories. Also one of the reasons I wasn't so detailed is because i'm a bit shy and felt a bit embarassed typing the dirty things . I don't know if I'll post the other stories but, if I do I'll be sure to watch the grammer and try to be as detailed as possible.
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 24th 2009, 6:08 pm

mariah702 wrote:
angelpup wrote:
Few friendly suggestions:
1. Use quotations. We need to know exactly what is being said.
2. It needs more details. That was short with no real details to turn the reader on.
3. Spell check. You used the wrong knew.
4. Enough with the exclamation marks. You seemed way to happy,even for a fan. Lol!
5. Please make it longer because its a good topic but you need more rising action to get to the climax.
You had a very intersting topic and I wish I could've read your other stories because I'm sure they were really good and maybe even better then this one.
behold da random

I'm sorry for the bad grammer and the lack of detail. I kind of rushed through this because of how many times I tried typing the other stories. Also one of the reasons I wasn't so detailed is because i'm a bit shy and felt a bit embarassed typing the dirty things . I don't know if I'll post the other stories but, if I do I'll be sure to watch the grammer and try to be as detailed as possible.


LOL! Yea, at first I didn't want to put details but I felt as if I had to. The dirty section with out dirty thoughts made no sense to me but that's just me. I can't wait for your decision on posting the other stories. The only reason I recongized your mistakes is because I have been working on grammer for this whole semester and its been worked in my brain. I really want to read them but if you don't want to post them you can email them to me at kjenae@aol.com.
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 24th 2009, 9:44 pm

angelpup wrote:
mariah702 wrote:
angelpup wrote:
Few friendly suggestions:
1. Use quotations. We need to know exactly what is being said.
2. It needs more details. That was short with no real details to turn the reader on.
3. Spell check. You used the wrong knew.
4. Enough with the exclamation marks. You seemed way to happy,even for a fan. Lol!
5. Please make it longer because its a good topic but you need more rising action to get to the climax.
You had a very intersting topic and I wish I could've read your other stories because I'm sure they were really good and maybe even better then this one.
behold da random

I'm sorry for the bad grammer and the lack of detail. I kind of rushed through this because of how many times I tried typing the other stories. Also one of the reasons I wasn't so detailed is because i'm a bit shy and felt a bit embarassed typing the dirty things . I don't know if I'll post the other stories but, if I do I'll be sure to watch the grammer and try to be as detailed as possible.


LOL! Yea, at first I didn't want to put details but I felt as if I had to. The dirty section with out dirty thoughts made no sense to me but that's just me. I can't wait for your decision on posting the other stories. The only reason I recongized your mistakes is because I have been working on grammer for this whole semester and its been worked in my brain. I really want to read them but if you don't want to post them you can email them to me at kjenae@aol.com.

I actually had only one other story but, I had typed it multiple times. After it getting deleted I just kind of gave up but, since you want to read it so bad i'll type it up and send it to you through an email because as of the moment I don't really want to post it here. Also just so I don't email a dirty Mikey story to some random person I'm going to email you first and once you respond telling me that it's you and you want me to send the story then I will. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 24th 2009, 11:23 pm

mariah702 wrote:
angelpup wrote:
mariah702 wrote:
angelpup wrote:
Few friendly suggestions:
1. Use quotations. We need to know exactly what is being said.
2. It needs more details. That was short with no real details to turn the reader on.
3. Spell check. You used the wrong knew.
4. Enough with the exclamation marks. You seemed way to happy,even for a fan. Lol!
5. Please make it longer because its a good topic but you need more rising action to get to the climax.
You had a very intersting topic and I wish I could've read your other stories because I'm sure they were really good and maybe even better then this one.
behold da random

I'm sorry for the bad grammer and the lack of detail. I kind of rushed through this because of how many times I tried typing the other stories. Also one of the reasons I wasn't so detailed is because i'm a bit shy and felt a bit embarassed typing the dirty things . I don't know if I'll post the other stories but, if I do I'll be sure to watch the grammer and try to be as detailed as possible.


LOL! Yea, at first I didn't want to put details but I felt as if I had to. The dirty section with out dirty thoughts made no sense to me but that's just me. I can't wait for your decision on posting the other stories. The only reason I recongized your mistakes is because I have been working on grammer for this whole semester and its been worked in my brain. I really want to read them but if you don't want to post them you can email them to me at kjenae@aol.com.

I actually had only one other story but, I had typed it multiple times. After it getting deleted I just kind of gave up but, since you want to read it so bad i'll type it up and send it to you through an email because as of the moment I don't really want to post it here. Also just so I don't email a dirty Mikey story to some random person I'm going to email you first and once you respond telling me that it's you and you want me to send the story then I will. Smile

Brillant idea!(I dont say this alot surpisingly) I'll check for you
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 25th 2009, 10:42 pm

if you do a expanded version that would be great
i can tell the story is going to be awesome
(short version was good too )
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 25th 2009, 10:50 pm

jalisa wrote:
if you do a expanded version that would be great
i can tell the story is going to be awesome
(short version was good too )

thanks! if you guys want me to do an expanded version i'll make it better and more detailed.
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 25th 2009, 11:36 pm

mariah702 wrote:
jalisa wrote:
if you do a expanded version that would be great
i can tell the story is going to be awesome
(short version was good too )

thanks! if you guys want me to do an expanded version i'll make it better and more detailed.

ooooo! I second it!
Itll be wunnerful lik da other 1
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 26th 2009, 12:12 am

angelpup wrote:
mariah702 wrote:
jalisa wrote:
if you do a expanded version that would be great
i can tell the story is going to be awesome
(short version was good too )

thanks! if you guys want me to do an expanded version i'll make it better and more detailed.

ooooo! I second it!
Itll be wunnerful lik da other 1

ok so let me guys ask you what you want. do you want me to do a sequel to this, just expand on this and make it better, or do a completely different story??
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 26th 2009, 12:56 am

can i hav 2 scoops?
sequel and expanded
but if not then ill just hav da awsum sequel
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 26th 2009, 1:55 am

angelpup wrote:
can i hav 2 scoops?
sequel and expanded
but if not then ill just hav da awsum sequel

sure, i'll do both but, it might be a couple days until i get around to it. Smile also did you get the email and read the story i sent you?
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 26th 2009, 10:13 am

mariah702 wrote:
angelpup wrote:
can i hav 2 scoops?
sequel and expanded
but if not then ill just hav da awsum sequel

sure, i'll do both but, it might be a couple days until i get around to it. Smile also did you get the email and read the story i sent you?

yep. Im trying to write my sequel but i have writers block
Ive read the other stories over and over and i am still stuck
idk wat im goin 2 do for the story so itll be awhile till i send it or post it
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 26th 2009, 2:05 pm

angelpup wrote:
mariah702 wrote:
angelpup wrote:
can i hav 2 scoops?
sequel and expanded
but if not then ill just hav da awsum sequel

sure, i'll do both but, it might be a couple days until i get around to it. Smile also did you get the email and read the story i sent you?

yep. Im trying to write my sequel but i have writers block
Ive read the other stories over and over and i am still stuck
idk wat im goin 2 do for the story so itll be awhile till i send it or post it

yah i know what you mean about the writers block but, i think i'm just lazy at this point ahaha but, i'll get around to it prob within the next week or two Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 29th 2009, 1:50 pm

yea! i got rid of writers blok and im writin lik crazy now!
my story is gonna b long lik rapunzels hair!
itll b done soon but idk when ill b able 2 send it 2 u
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 29th 2009, 4:00 pm

nevermind. Ill send u the story but i need an instant reply
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 31st 2009, 1:39 am

Beyond all of the constructive criticism you already got..I have to say I really like this story!! xD

Strangely I was also thinking about writing a story about a "lucky girl" running into Michael at a Barn's and Noble!...but my story wasn't going to end NEARLY as...*ahem* interesting as your story did Very Happy lol

I love the bit where they realize they're wearing matching undies LOL
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 31st 2009, 4:32 pm

Wonderlust wrote:
Beyond all of the constructive criticism you already got..I have to say I really like this story!! xD

Strangely I was also thinking about writing a story about a "lucky girl" running into Michael at a Barn's and Noble!...but my story wasn't going to end NEARLY as...*ahem* interesting as your story did Very Happy lol

I love the bit where they realize they're wearing matching undies LOL

thank you so much hun, i really appreciate it! and yah i thought to myself i love mikey and i love reading so let me try to combine the two hahaha Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 31st 2009, 4:45 pm

to everyone: i just want to say that i really appreciate your advice and kind words and i've decided just for the sake of time that i'm not going to edit this story but, instead just do the sequel and try to make it better then this. also i'll write completely different stories in the near future. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 31st 2009, 6:14 pm

mariah702 wrote:
to everyone: i just want to say that i really appreciate your advice and kind words and i've decided just for the sake of time that i'm not going to edit this story but, instead just do the sequel and try to make it better then this. also i'll write completely different stories in the near future. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Book Worm :)   December 31st 2009, 6:23 pm

my sequel is posted! someone pleaz chekout da story and comment it or ill have a sucky new year!
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