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PostSubject: Liberian Girl   February 25th 2010, 7:39 pm

First, of all cut me some slack, its my first.
Secondly, thanks to Jalisa for providing me with this one of her many half-way done stories.
Lastly, i hope you enjoy.



“If only you knew, how much I do,” I sang along with the
music as I was getting my lettuce out the fridge. “Do love you,” the song went
on as he came into the kitchen and hugged me from behind. “How was it” I asked turning
my head so he could kiss me on the cheek. “Starts out good” he said trailing
kisses down my neck “and gets better when I see you.” I put down my knife and turned around to face
him. “Well that’s good” I said as I threw my arms around his neck. He looked down
upon me with his hungry eyes, the eyes full of love, affection, and desire.


He kissed me softly with his rose-petal soft lips as I drew
his body closer to me, and kissed him more forcefully. I grinned as I felt him
harden while he pushed my lettuce, my bowl, and everything on the floor. Baby,
that’s the fourth bowl, I panted into his ear, as he licked and trailed kisses
down my neck. “Don’t worry about it,” he mumbled as he picked me up and placed
me on the island countertop, “I’ll buy another one, he said as I raised my arms
up as he pulled my shirt over my head. I threw my head back from excitement as
he nibbled on my collarbone, gosh; I was waiting for this all day. “Oh
Michael,” I sighed as he put his hands on my legs and separated my thighs.
“Baby, my pants” “Yea” he moaned as I leaned back on the counter as he undid my
belt buckle. He climbed on the island and hovered above me. “my pants” I
thought “well forget it” I was burning with desire. I wanted to feel him close
to me. I pulled him down and kissed him feverishly. His skin was so hot I could
just feel the passion pulsing through him. “Michael baby,” I said between
kisses “we have to take off our pants.” But there was nothing but heat. I wanted
him and he wanted me. But he was too caught up in the heat. “Ring, ring, ring” the
phone sounded. I pushed him up “Michael the phone”. “It might not be important”
he said as he leaned back over me. “Yea” I said as I ran my fingers over his
chest as the phone stopped. He began thumbing my nipples through my bra. “Oh
Michael, I moaned. Being so close to him without him in me was a disease and it
was killing the hell out of me. “Ring, ring, ring” “Shit” Michael spat as the
phone began to ring again. “I know” I huffed. “Hmm hm” he pouted as he helped
me down off the counter. I pecked him on the cheek then ran into the family
room to answer the phone.


“Hello” “Hi, Shun, I was just calling to check on you and
Michael, haven’t heard from you guys in a minute.” “Oh, well, we’re good” I said. “Actually we’re
umm a bit busy right now” I said smiling to myself. “Nasty selves,” she said
laughing “Well you guys call me tomorrow, alright”. “Yea, bye Janet” “Bye”. I
silently placed the phone back on the hook, and pulled off my pants, and was
about to tiptoe back into the kitchen when he came up behind me put his hands
on my shoulders then unclamped my bra, and pulled it off. Slowly he turned me
around to face him. “I see you’ve undressed, well almost.” I said as I looked
him up and down running my hand down his body. I ran my hand down to the edge
of his boxers, just to mess with him, and grabbed his dick through the fabric.
“’Somebody’s ready for some fun,”


I lightly laughed. He leaned me back over the sofa and
rubbed his hand back and forth across my damp panties before pulling them and
his briefs off. I pushed him over and made him sit as I straddled his lap. I
could feel his dick standing hard and erect poking for my ass. He placed his
hands on my waist and lifted me so he could enter. Instantly I threw my head
back in bliss. “Girl”, he moaned as he drove himself farther into me. Whoa, something
had happened between now and the last time we where together, because I was
tight (real tight) and I really wasn’t expecting that. “Michael, I can’t do it
I,” stammered already feeling weak (meaning on top taking control). He slowly
pulled out. “What,” he said taunting me. “Mrs. Bad, can’t handle this?” he
asked lying me down on the couch. “Don’t tease, Michael.” He replied with a
light laugh and hung his sexy head to the side. “Why you always teasing?” I asked
on the verge of sexually killing him. “Don’t worry, I got this” he sighed in my
ear as he slipped his hand between us to see how moist I was. I bit my lip from
sexual hunger. “Michael,” I panted “god, you’re such a fucking tease,” I sighed
as I grinded my body against his hand. He teasingly pulled his hand away. “You
know you like it” he whispered as he separated my legs. I blushed. He was
right. His teasing ways drove me crazy. “Let it down” I cooed implying about
his hair. He sat up and slowly pulled the band off his hair. I sighed as he shook
his head loosening the curls.


“Alright” I said patting my thighs ready to get this
started. “Hold up” he said as he jumped up and walked over to the table and put
on a record. I bit my lips watching his lil tootie bootie sway as he walked
away. Must I say it made a nice backdrop for his ohwee. I put my hands under my head as I heard the
first note of Ready For The Worlds’ Love You Down. I should have known. I
closed my eyes as the song started and waited for the low sigh from the record.
I loved this song and oh did Michael know it. “Baby…you ready” he asked as he
climbed on the couch hovering above me. I started to reply but his lips smothered
mines as he raped my lips with his and crawled between my parted thighs. “Oooh,”
I lightly groaned. He grabbed my chin with his right hand and lightly kissed me
on the lips before venturing down farther south. I arched my back in pleasure
as he licked a line down my stomach. “Baby,” he droned. “Yes, Michael Yes. I stutter. “Girl,” he
growled showering my breast with his sweet tender kisses. “I love you,” he said
sitting up to look me in the face. “Michael I know,” I stated. “I know,” he
said smiling and kissing my belly button then began to circle it with his
tongue. His fingers begin to lightly tap the beat of the song into my sides. He
kissed his way across my stomach and down to the spot that ached for his love
the most. “Oooh yes”, I cried out as he prodded the opening of my walls with
his fingers igniting my body. “I’m ready,” I uttered. “Oh, I know,” he blew at
me as he gently lifted my legs to enter me for the second time. “Boy,” I gasped
in shock as he quickly slid his entire member into me. Michael was indeed well
endowed. The look on his face when he entered into my hot, moist, pleasure
abiding walls was sheer ecstasy. “Mmmm girl,” he moaned as he pumped himself
harder and deeper inside me. Sweats
beads began dripping from his hair and off his body as the pleasure between us
intensified while time ticked on. I cried out in ecstasy as my senses flooded
my body causing me to break out in a hot sweat. Michael had set my body ablaze and we were
burning together. He placed his two fingers across the front tip of my
pussy and began to vibrate them fiercely causing me to thrash against the sofa.
“Michael,” I called as I felt my body
began to tremble. He hitched up my legs around his waist and slammed into me,
as if demanding I call out his name. I
hooked my legs around his midsection and held on with all the strength I could
muster. “Michael,” I murmured. “Yes baby”, he panted nearly out of
breath moving his fingers fasted. “Ooooa Michael,” I gasped fighting to hold
off my spasms. He smiled down at me seeing the struggle written all over my
face. “Let it go,” he stammered as we both climaxed together.”Yess” I screamed
as he let out the sexiest moan I’ve ever heard. Sweetly my body throbbed around
his pulsating joint as he filled me with his creamy juices. “Oh, god,” he
sighed as he collapsed on top of me. “Baby,” he whispered lowly tracing lines
on my stomach. “Hmm,” I moaned “I love you” “Naku Penda Piya” I whispered back.
“Mpenziwe” we both replied in unison.
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 25th 2010, 10:18 pm

.............*speechless*................
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 25th 2010, 10:20 pm

me like the way you finished this

NICE NICE
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 26th 2010, 3:39 pm

AWWWW *cries tears of joy* that was so cute and so hot at the same time, just like Michael, and I absolutely LOVE how you quoted my most favorite part of Liberian Girl at the end. I keep going back to that part and reading it again and again.

It was beautiful mjstruelove and u should defintely write more.
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 26th 2010, 6:31 pm

That was beautiful. nuff said
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 26th 2010, 6:41 pm

MJKage wrote:
That was beautiful. nuff said

totally agreed x10
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 26th 2010, 10:58 pm

*run on stage and bow runs back grabs
jalisa then we both go on and bow together*

OMG thanks alot you guys really
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 26th 2010, 11:08 pm

mjstruelove wrote:
*run on stage and bow runs back grabs
jalisa then we both go on and bow together*

OMG thanks alot you guys really

dont thank us
its just da truth!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 26th 2010, 11:16 pm

lostinparadise wrote:
AWWWW *cries tears of joy* that was so cute and so hot at the same time, just like Michael, and I absolutely LOVE how you quoted my most favorite part of Liberian Girl at the end. I keep going back to that part and reading it again and again.

It was beautiful mjstruelove and u should defintely write more.

Definitely write more..... about that . umm.. . yea...


but enjoys the feedback
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 26th 2010, 11:17 pm

angelpup wrote:
mjstruelove wrote:
*run on stage and bow runs back grabs
jalisa then we both go on and bow together*

OMG thanks alot you guys really

dont thank us
its just da truth!!!

plus, we LOVE complimenting good writers and this was good writing;)

p.s. What's wrong? Do u think u can't write another fic? Cuz I'm sure every/anybody here would be happy to help u in any way.
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 26th 2010, 11:27 pm

naw its just idk i mean it wasn't dat hard
jalisa practically wrote it but wat eva

i guess i can write another 1 (just not in the near future)
*3 tests coming up*
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 26th 2010, 11:31 pm

understandable, school's totally killing me too.
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 27th 2010, 5:47 pm

it kills us all!!
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   March 1st 2010, 1:34 pm

OMFG. It was like slowly burning embers on a cloudy evening... So sweet yet sweltering with passion...

Please excuse me as a breath into my paper bag... *weaze-a-weAZE* o.O
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   March 1st 2010, 5:29 pm

such enthusiasm
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   March 4th 2010, 4:44 pm

LOL This was one of your "half-way done stories" jalisa?? You should seriously consider completing your fics!

And mjstruelove, your killin' me with your SIG. Can't stop staring... *____*
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   March 4th 2010, 4:56 pm

i agree completly
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   March 4th 2010, 8:24 pm

Wonderlust wrote:
LOL This was one of your "half-way done stories" jalisa?? You should seriously consider completing your fics!

And mjstruelove, your killin' me with your SIG. Can't stop staring... *____*

i agree to the sig part

its hypnotizing me
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   March 5th 2010, 5:28 pm

thatz michael 4 ya
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   September 11th 2010, 7:05 am

"I bit my lips watching his lil tootie bootie sway as he walked
away."

O_________________O
LOLOL
That was so cute xD
Loved it so much!
MOREEE Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Liberian Girl   February 13th 2011, 4:41 am

WOW. Just, WOW.

For your first fanfic...This was AMAZING! Definitley better than my first fanfic.
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